Im running away turning my head to find its the dead of night i look foward i fall to the ground something has my leg i look back a hand i scream i pull forward a shoes on my hand
i start to talk "w-what do you want" i say as i take my hand back the person smiles from down here it looked sinister "oh all i want is your fresh blood" i stared back in horror
M-m-my blood..." "thats what i said if you coudn't hear" the next thing i knew he picked me up i saw in his eyes "now be a good girl and unwrap your neck please" without knowing
i did what he said i ripped my scarf off he smiled "good" he opened his mouth to reveal fangs he looked at me for the last time and said "this is going to hurt like hell" he put his mouth
to my neck i screamed in pain i held my hand to my face and watched in horror as my life was slipping away i felt cold nothing seemed right anymore i closed my eyes and complete
darkness took over... "Hey Kiar look who i found" i looked over at claude and began to walk towards him I looked down and to my surprise i found my sisters body cold all the life
drained from her body tears began to form in my eyes I crouched down my hand touched her face "my sister i will find your killer and rip his heart out from his chest and make
sure you have not died in vain may you rest in peace for eternity" i whispered this in her ear i got up I turned to face claude i smiled my devilish smile "Lets go find that b**tered
that murdered my sister" and we walked away from my sisters dead body
Nice prologue
I found some errors but overall it's well written