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My sarrow sits and stares at me looking into my Soul
Taking away my life every time i close my eyes
I wither away, I rot only dust takes my place
i will never survive in this dark lonely place.

My dust sits on the floor just like nothing
someone comes to open a window it opens
i begin to circle the room getting into
peoples eyes before i leave my solitude forever.

I go out into the night sky people look up to
see the stars but not me for i am nothing
this place of hatred and love has killed me
i fly into the night never to be seen agian
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this is a poem i hope im getting better at them if not pls tell me it would mean alot anyways thanks watchers ur support keeps me going

Just because my soul is empty doesn't mean my heart is :heart:
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Mood: Joy *XxKiBAWOLFxX Jul 26, 2012  Student Artist
wow. ur awsome @ poetry! nice.
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~vampirelily56 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^^ :3
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*XxKiBAWOLFxX Jul 26, 2012  Student Artist
ur welcome.
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~vampirelily56 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
x3 ur truly an amazing friend ur in my family just look on my deviantID till u find ur pick and read what it says
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*XxKiBAWOLFxX Jul 26, 2012  Student Artist
thx. ur an amazing friend, too. ok i will.
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~vampirelily56 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
>////< pssh ur just saying that :iconblushplz:
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*XxKiBAWOLFxX Jul 26, 2012  Student Artist
no im not. ur awsome. yay! thx i like wat u said bout me in the ID thingy (lol). im a shapeshifting wolf, BTW. lol
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~vampirelily56 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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We often think we are unimportant or insignificant, that nothing we do matters, but we affect a lot of lives whoever we are. Everybody has a role to play. Nicely written.
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~vampirelily56 May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks that means a lot to me especially coming from you your poems are the best were i am hoping to only improve but thanks for taking the time to read it and write a comment thank you
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